Sad Girl (Original Poem)
An original poem. I wrote this in about 5 minutes. It's one of those poems where you write out exactly what you think. It's somewhat based on someone on here. You know who you are.
Sad Girl,
Talking about death.
Suicide, and how
today's your last breath.
Sad Girl,
Hating life,
Spending her days
Staring at a bloody knife.
Sad Girl,
Wanting nothing more
Than getting back
The life she'd had before.
Sad Girl,
Please please just try.
There IS a life worth living,
You don't need to cry.
Sad Girl,
Someday, there will
Come times where
Life goes downhill.
But Sad Girl,
Pick yourself up,
Get back up
And stand up tall.
Because a Sad Girl
CAN become a
Happy Girl.
If you try.
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Very honest and real. Thank you for sharing this.
Your welcome..
That actually helped cuz im going through a hard time... but atleast im not suicide sad^_^
Its very good! Nice job! :)
Aw, that is an awesome poem! :D Kinda depressing, but still. :D
Yeah... but it's kinda hard to make suicide happy..
Well put.
Can I send it to people who want to commit suicide?(:
Anyways, 5 stars and favorited!
And a cookie! >>>O
Yes, please! That's what I was trying to do, convince someone out of suicide.
I absolutely love this. You are the best poet Quibblo has ever seen :)
Not really, but thanks! :)
But good poem!
Thanks!
This is depressing D;
I know :(
Nice!
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did you happen to read my poem, 'Girl'? If you didn't, ok, but it kinda reminds me of mine, it's kinda similar
just ignore me. I mis-remembered my own poem :S SORRY
No, I didn't read it..