A Few Of My Songs

I love to write songs....i know these aren't great. I could use some constructive critiscism if you'll give it. :) Thanks!

Chapter 1

"Evil'

Okay, I call this one "Evil".

Do not look into my eyes
Do not whisper in my ear
I am a deadly weapon
And you'll be sorry for what you hear

Do no touch my hand
I was created to destroy
And don't take one step closer
For I sense malice in your voice

(Chorus)
I'm a pool of death in a bright room
I will lead you to your doom
I'm a raging hailstorm on a summer day
And if you love life stay, stay, away

You can love me if you wish to die
The look on my face will make you cry
My smile leaks acid off my tongue
It's pointless if you try to run

I'm a pool of death in a bright room
I will lead you to your doom
I'm a raging hailstorm on a summer day
And if you love life stay, stay, away

You wish I was never born
You want to run away
Until you oush me out of your head
I'm here, I am here to stay

I'm a pool of death in a bright room
I will lead you to your doom
I'm a raging hailstorm on a summer day
And if you love life stay, stay, away
Away, away.....

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