Fear Landscape
You run
But you can't hide
Take out your gun
For this horrible ride
Kill a loved one
Fear taunts you alongside
This is no fun
You've realized
You drop your gun, but what's done is done
You'd already cried
Tears there are none
You're now dried eyed
It leaves you numb
The serum subsides
You're left undone
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Nice poem. For me it tells me about a girl that shot a loved one. Now shes regretting it and feeling scared about it. Thats what i think.
Nice poem. For me it tells me about a girl that shot a loved one. Now shes regretting it and feeling scared about it. Thats what i think.
Thank you :D
That's pretty much what I wanted readers to think ^-^
Oh, I see. Ouch. O.o
Yep :(
Uh...why do they have to kill a loved one?
It would make more sense if you read Divergent, but I won't make cx
In Divergent, for the people in the Dauntless faction (the brave) they had to get into simulations where they would face their worst fears. One of the fears almost everyone had to face, was the fear of either killing a loved one or having to watch someone kill a loved one.
Hunger games...
I guess you can say that :)
O.o
Don't worry about it :)
I see (:
Yup :)
You're welcomez! :D Say, was this based on Divergent?
Yeah, pretty much :)
Wow! Great job! I loved the rhyming and felt as though I was going through a fear landscape itself. Definitely five stars :D
Omagosh! Thank you!!! :D
Very sad end :'( Good job!
Yeah I know, sorry 'bout that :(
Thank you :D
This is awesome! Luv it.
Thank you :)