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Chapter 1

You Came And Saved Me Tonight ~ GreyShadow7

by: GeekRemix
This is a very interesting story so far. But did not like the fact that it ruins what going to happen next. I'm not saying it ruins the whole thing, but I find it off putting.

What I really did like is how it is narrated from a character that is not Murrean (sorry if I spelled it wrong). That gives hope for a new character and plot twist to this story.

The details are absolutely impeccable. Love them. And the beginning and ending quote. Amazing

89/100, so far

http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/jA-PvIu/You-Came-and-Saved-Me-Tonight-FULL-STORY-This-is-different-from-the-other-one

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