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Chapter 2

What Lies In My Past

by: GeekRemix
OH MY GLOB. This is such a great story. It reaches into the dark pits of depression with a reflection of the past. I love it. I hope you continue with the story and writes more stories like this.

I loved how you made us curious as to why Jason died and leaves a element of suspense.

All around great story. But, I would like to see mores aspects of the main character life except Jason

93/100
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/jDR4xqY/What-Lies-in-My-Past?story_chapter=1

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