Lily's Story Reviews! :)

H'llo, fellow Quibblonians. Welcome to the Lily side. We have stories.

Chapter 1

Hello, all you pigeon-brained lot! (And, also, hello to those who are actually pigeons.) As you can see... I'm bored. -.-

These things are cool, so I thought I'd give one a try. I'll do original stories, group stories, and fanfictions. However, it depends on what fandom you're writing about. I'll review

-Doctor Who
-Harry Potter
-BBC's Sherlock

...and a few other lesser-known book fanfictions. If yours does not fit any of these fandoms, or you have a crossover fanfic with one of these, feel free to leave a comment and I'll definitely consider it.

I will use this template to review the story:

Summary- (This will be written by you.)

Characters- (A test to see if I really got what the characters are all about.)

Grammar/Spelling Rating: (1 to 10 rating)

Originality/canon Rating: (1 to 10, if it's an original story I'll rate it on originality. If it's a fanfic, I'll rate it on canon.)

My thoughts: (where I'll say if I have any improvement suggestions, if I liked it or not, ect ect. :P)

Other: (Favourite characters, and other such.)

Overall rating: (1 to 10 rating.)

Mind you, I'm not going to go easy, I'm going to honestly say what I think, and I'm not trying to hurt anyone. But I do sometimes, which is a rather annoying trait of mine, so if you want to see the review, know what you're in for.

In the comments below, if you want your story rated, leave a comment with a link and a summary and I'll get to you as soon as I can. :D

So, all you bashful little pigeons, begin writing! See you on the dark side. >:D


Table of Contents:

1 - (Doctor Who and Beatles Fanfic Mashup by timelord101 and MrsHarrison1965)
2 - The Snow Dusted On Their Hearts (A Harry Potter Group Story) by A_Small_Drop, CVDB, and QuoteGal
3 - The Lady of the Lake by bookworm135
4 - Stone Hunters by DZLPS

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