View of the Killer (new chapter)
One step. Two steps. Three steps...they're getting faster...faster...faster... faster now...she's crying.
Running and crying...what I used to do, but they laughed at my pained cries.
Echoes. Her cries echo through the empty hallways, I hear every step.
I get closer and closer to her.
This...thrill...adrenaline...hunting a prey.
She's stopped running, she's weeping on her knees.
"D-DON'T KILL ME PLEASE!"
She yelled out to me...it made me want to sing, this rush.
"...la...la la...la la la...la..."
I stepped closer and closer behind her, bent down to her ear behind her as I whispered...
"...la..."
I put the knife to her back, she let out a scream.
"PLEASE DON'T! NO!"
Did she just tell me what to do?
I let her escape as she ran, her legs collapsed and she fell.
I look at her and laugh.
"WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING YOU PSYCHO-PATH?!?"
Psycho...that echoed in my head, and turned into cold rage.
I started walking towards her again.
"...la la la...la la...la la la...la la..."
"NO! PLEASE! NO!"
I caught her by her shirt collar, pulled her into my direction.
As I whispered yet again, "...la..."
I pulled the knife and stabbed her in her heart area.
I could hear the sounds of her choking on her blood.
I then walked away from her...she will die slowly in this abandoned place. Death by blood loss, stabbing, murder.
I walk away, with my bloody knife in my hand...feeling nothing but accomplishment...five down...none to go.
This rush I'll never feel again...no...I will...soon.
Running and crying...what I used to do, but they laughed at my pained cries.
Echoes. Her cries echo through the empty hallways, I hear every step.
I get closer and closer to her.
This...thrill...adrenaline...hunting a prey.
She's stopped running, she's weeping on her knees.
"D-DON'T KILL ME PLEASE!"
She yelled out to me...it made me want to sing, this rush.
"...la...la la...la la la...la..."
I stepped closer and closer behind her, bent down to her ear behind her as I whispered...
"...la..."
I put the knife to her back, she let out a scream.
"PLEASE DON'T! NO!"
Did she just tell me what to do?
I let her escape as she ran, her legs collapsed and she fell.
I look at her and laugh.
"WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING YOU PSYCHO-PATH?!?"
Psycho...that echoed in my head, and turned into cold rage.
I started walking towards her again.
"...la la la...la la...la la la...la la..."
"NO! PLEASE! NO!"
I caught her by her shirt collar, pulled her into my direction.
As I whispered yet again, "...la..."
I pulled the knife and stabbed her in her heart area.
I could hear the sounds of her choking on her blood.
I then walked away from her...she will die slowly in this abandoned place. Death by blood loss, stabbing, murder.
I walk away, with my bloody knife in my hand...feeling nothing but accomplishment...five down...none to go.
This rush I'll never feel again...no...I will...soon.
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Alright then! This is going to Favorites X)
:D yay! Lol I'm glad you like it ^-^
This is a good story and I like how you told how the victim felt :)
:D thanks lol its been killing me to write it XD (._.) heh...I didn't mean for that 'pun' or whatever to happen XP lol but I'm so glad you think that ^-^
This is a good story and I like how you told how the victim felt :)
Oh I like this ^-^
Ya do? :D thank you lol I'm glad its enjoyable ^-^
haha I liked that joke at the end :)
X3 thanks lol
Addicting. More more more please!!! So good!
Wow, alright lol I'm glad you enjoy it ^-^ I sure will make more haha :D gets a bit giddy inside lol
That was intense!
Why thank you XD lol
I liked it, you should write more :D
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and sure ^-^ I'll write more, I'm always willing to :D
Definitely make this a series, I like this a lot, if you do plan on continuing, I want to see where this killers massacre leads to. Great job.
:D sure lol I'm always willing ^-^
Keeps getting better, Chapter 2.
Thanks :D lol
Wow. Intense. Are you planning on writing more?
Sure ^-^ if ya want me to lol I hope it was enjoyable, and I'm always willing to write more :)