Given the general plots, would you read my stories?
i have one suggestion. why dont you have the four find strage creatures to ride into battle? not like unicorns but somthing that you can make up.
and yes ill read your book
cool!!! i loooooove to write stories! in fact, i'm working on a fantasy series right now... it's kind of like Eragon, only it's different... and better... JK (probably not... i'm not THAT good at writing)! anyways, i would read your book! i don't have any suggestions, cuz it sounds awesome to me! let me know how it goes...
yeah that sounds like a cool story i cant rly tell u how to improve it bcos i dont even no the whole story